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Sentence Correction Routines

Level B2–C2 · spotting & fixing errors; self-editing

◎What you'll master

  • Scan your own writing for the nine high-frequency error categories the TOEFL rewards you for fixing.
  • Run a step-by-step proofreading routine — one pass per error type — instead of reading vaguely for "mistakes".
  • Repair run-ons and comma splices three ways: a period, a semicolon, or a comma + coordinating conjunction.
  • Turn fragments into full sentences by supplying the missing subject, verb, or main clause.
  • Catch the quiet errors — subject–verb agreement, verb form, articles, prepositions, word form, and plurals — before the clock runs out.

1Why a routine beats 'just re-reading'

Most test-takers "check" their writing by reading it once and trusting their ear. The ear misses what it expects to hear. A routine replaces that vague pass with a set of targeted scans — you hunt for one type of error at a time, so nothing hides behind the meaning. The nine categories below are where TOEFL essays lose points most often.

Error categoryHow to spot itHow to fix it
Subject–verb agreementMatch each verb to its real subject (ignore the words in between)Singular subject → singular verb: The list is…
Verb tense & formCheck every verb: right tense? right form after to / -ing / have / did?Use one consistent timeline; base form after modals/did
ArticlesEvery countable singular noun needs a/an/the or another determinerAdd a/an (first mention) or the (specific)
PrepositionsRead verb + preposition pairs; do they collocate?Learn them as chunks: depend on, interested in
Run-ons & comma splicesTwo full sentences joined by nothing (run-on) or only a comma (splice)Period, semicolon, or comma + and/but/so…
FragmentsA "sentence" with no subject, no main verb, or only a dependent clauseAdd the missing part or attach it to a full clause
Word formIs the word the right part of speech for its slot?success (n.) → successful (adj.) → successfully (adv.)
PluralsCount nouns after numbers/many/several need -sAdd the plural ending: three reasons
Word orderSubject–verb–object; adverbs and adjectives in their normal placeI often read, not I read often books

2Subject–verb, tense & form: the first two passes

Pass 1 — every subject–verb pair

Find the real subject of each verb and make them agree. The danger is a phrase between the subject and the verb that pulls your ear toward the wrong noun.

The box of old letters was heavy. (box is the subject, not letters)

Each of the students has a laptop. · Each of the students have a laptop.

Pass 2 — every verb tense & form

Ask two questions of each verb: is the tense right for the timeline, and is the form right for what comes before it? After to, use the base; after a modal or did, use the base; after have, use the past participle; after be for the continuous, use -ing.

She wants to improve (not to improving). · They have finished (not have finish). · He didn't go (not didn't went).
⚠ Watch out — don't let the tense drift mid-essay. If you start in the past, stay there unless the meaning truly changes: Yesterday I go to the library and studied. → Yesterday I went to the library and studied.

3Articles & prepositions: the quiet third pass

Articles

Do one sweep looking only at nouns. Every singular countable noun needs a determiner — a/an for a first or general mention, the when the noun is already specific or shared knowledge.

I read book about history. → I read a book about the history of Rome.

Prepositions

Prepositions rarely follow logic — learn them as fixed chunks with the words they attach to. On your sweep, check each verb, adjective, or noun that is usually followed by a set preposition.

ChunkExample
depend onSuccess depends on effort.
interested inShe is interested in biology.
good atHe is good at maths.
reason forThe reason for the delay was traffic.
⚠ Watch out — a very common slip is discuss about the topic — discuss takes no preposition: discuss the topic.

4Sentence boundaries: run-ons, splices & fragments

Run-on (two sentences, no punctuation)

A run-on jams two independent clauses together with nothing between them.

The exam was hard I still passed.

Comma splice (two sentences, only a comma)

A comma splice is the same problem, but with a lone comma doing a job it cannot do.

The exam was hard, I still passed.

Three ways to repair both

FixResult
Period (two sentences)The exam was hard. I still passed.
Semicolon (close link)The exam was hard; I still passed.
Comma + conjunctionThe exam was hard, but I still passed.

Fragment (not a full sentence)

A fragment is missing a subject or a main verb, or it is only a dependent clause left standing alone. Fix it by adding the missing piece or joining it to a full clause.

Because the weather was bad. → Because the weather was bad, we stayed home.
Running late for the bus. → She was running late for the bus.
⚠ Watch out — a fragment is not fixed just by deleting the subordinator — Because the weather was bad still needs a main clause. Don't confuse a long fragment with a complete sentence.

5Word form, plurals & word order: the last polish

On your final read, check that each word is the right part of speech, that countable nouns carry the plural -s when needed, and that the order of words is natural.

ProblemWrong → Right
Word forma success company → a successful company
Word form (adverb)She sings beautiful. → She sings beautifully.
Pluralmany student → many students
Word orderI read often the news. → I often read the news.
Your proofreading checklist (run these passes in order)
1. Subject–verb: does every verb match its real subject?  2. Verb tense & form: right tense, right form after to / modal / have / be?  3. Articles & prepositions: a/an/the on singular count nouns; correct preposition chunks?  4. Boundaries: any run-ons, comma splices, or fragments?  5. Polish: word form, plural -s, word order.   Read once for each type — five quick passes beat one blurry one.

6Putting it together: edit a messy sentence

Watch the routine repair one sentence carrying several errors. Fix one category at a time and the sentence rebuilds itself.

Each of the student have to write a essay, they must discuss about two reason.

Agreement: Each … has · Article: an essay · Boundary: comma splice → essay; they · Preposition: discuss two (no about) · Plural: two reasons.

Each of the students has to write an essay; they must discuss two reasons.
Practice — 15 questions with instant feedback
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Question 1

Which version is correct?______

Question 2

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Question 3
Add the article — I bought (article) umbrella.
Question 4

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Question 5
Fix the preposition — Success depends (preposition) effort.
Question 6

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Question 7

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Question 8
Fix the verb form — They have (finish) the project.
Question 9

Which version is correct?______

Question 10
Fix agreement — The number of tourists (increase) every year.
Question 11

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Question 12

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Question 13
Fix the boundary with one word — Type the punctuation that best joins them: The rain stopped ___ we went outside. (a single mark)
Question 14

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Question 15

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✎Fix the Error

Each sentence has one mistake in the underlined word. Type the correction and check.

1.The list of applicants are on my desk.

2.She wants to improving her writing.

3.The lecture was long, I still enjoyed it.

4.We should discuss about the results tomorrow.

5.He gave three reason for his decision.